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let loose in the shopping mall -
a pretty flower in the concrete sprawl
the Chiligirl did contemplate
the ways of Life, Reason and fate

A giant teddy, balloons in trees,
in a lake about to freeze
Loreley (she holds the key:
the first fanart for you from me!)

The Austrian queen of Tights..that's true..
from Nightwalk black to Underground blue
or peering out from below a coat
who cares why - you've got my vote!

Always on a road, it seems
or Grunging up my weirdest dreams
this Pan Am girl in Exile far
She's best in black, with a guitar

Watch out folks, you may get burned
all this time, you haven't learned?
she's radioactive, a super bowl
the next Kate Moss her final goal

Nico, Bowie, Suede and Reed
all fullfill your musical need
and leon, he'd Clean for you..that's cool
No women no kids..that's the rule!

So what's with all this smart-assed rhyme?
I just thought I'd take some time
to wish you, in a different way
All the best, forever and today :)

Happy Birthday Monika, you are indeed the Edelweiss in the concrete garden :)
Whilst technically done a few hours before the day itself..(depending where you are in the World..), this is to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY to :iconchililady:

not quite a song but something a little different..

To make sense of it all, please visit her page and hopefully it will all click!
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Jasman71 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
aww thankyou :) Thought it was about time to get some words down again!
Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
:iconkimberely: u are most welcome Jason, u did it well:iconwavesplz:
sharpietatts Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Very well done!! :)
Jasman71 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
thankyou dear:)
cyborg44 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009  Professional General Artist
A man of many talents, well done sir.
boot-cheese-3000 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
cute poem. i hope she likes it. if i didn't know better though i swore you were listening to the beatles or john lennon when you composed this. thumbz up award, i was thouroughly entertained.
Jasman71 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
yup she seems quite happy with it! Actually I know her musical tastes, so this is probably nothing like that :), but I just went through some old galleries and came up with this... as I say, all the words will make sense if you visit her gallery, you will see relevant pics :)

Thanks for reading :wave:
boot-cheese-3000 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
yeah i did. i might be in her devWatch list, i saw her photos and liked them alot.
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