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You are my friend
My trusted one
Who loves cooling rain
more than the sun

You were my muse
For a while my desire
Til I read the signs,
Damped down the fire

A few tears shed
No problem at all
Then a deep breath
And try to walk tall

Full of surpises
All truly heard
Nothing repeated
I gave you my word

There for advice
Eachtime I would ask
Nothing too much
No mean a task

Beautiful lady
There to adore
To remind you what living
really is for

I owe you bigtime
For words past and new
And for just being there
I truly thank you

Thankyou for being
Above all my friend
I love you and wish you
The best til the end
Just a few lines for a good friend
to say thankyou

(and for once a poem not about my loving sweetheart...but beware...more soppiness soon :)
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:iconpurplebelladonna:
Purplebelladonna Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
:flaguk: :rose: :flagcanada: Really good...
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Jasman71 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
Thankyou :) :flagus:
and thankyou..
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nasher91 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
this is lovely :)
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:iconjasman71:
Jasman71 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
thankyou :)
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sharpietatts Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
This is beautiful Jason!! :hug:
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:iconjasman71:
Jasman71 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
Thankyou :D
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sharpietatts Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2008
You're welcome
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razzXgirl101 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
this is rly rly good!
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:iconjasman71:
Jasman71 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
Thanks, It is for a friend that has been so wonderful to me for the time I have known her, and to say thankyou.
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razzXgirl101 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
may i ask who?
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